This week´s blog you need to write a formal e-mail to request a scholarship, using the following information:
- your name, age, education
- Creative English Scholarship to travel to England and the United States to spend time studying and practicing English
- why you should be given the scholarship
- why you need the scholarship
- why you study English
- where you want to travel and travel dates
- request information about any extra costs (hotel, food, etc.)
Good morning, guys! Hope you´re having a great Tuesday.
ReplyDeleteThis week´s blog you need to write a formal e-mail to request a scholarship, using the following information:
• your name, age, education
• Creative English Scholarship to travel to England and the United States to spend time studying and practicing English
• why you should be given the scholarship
• why you need the scholarship
• why you study English
• where you want to travel and travel dates
• request information about any extra costs (hotel, food, etc.)
Dear Ms. Laura Reyes
I’m writing you in relation to the Creative English Scholarship offered by your Institute to travel to England and the United States to spend time studying and practicing English. I’m interested in apply for the Scholarship and I would be grateful if you provide some further information about the Program eligibility and selection procedures.
Firstly, I’m pretty sure of being accomplish all the eligibility requirements. Sooner I will be finishing an English program at the prestigious Academy “Universal de Idiomas”. I have 44 years old and an University degree in Accounting.
Secondly, it is well knowing the important of English language because the opportunities that anybody could have for professional growing. It always has been one of my goals, like always have been to study to have a Postgraduate education in North America or England. That’s why I’m studying English. The Scholarship will help me to travel and Practicing to upgrade my level of knowing on the English language and pronunciation.
Finally, I have a question about the dates. Would you mind sending me more details about if there are any kind of condition to pick up the date of the travel?
I’ll be free from next May. Also I’ll appreciated if you send me a cost list related with hotel rates, food and transportation.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Jose Enrique Ortiz Quintero
Great job! A few corrections: "I´m interested in applying for.." and "..if you provided some further information" and "First of all, I´m certain that I meet all the elegibility requirements..." and "Soon I will be finishing..." "I am 44" "...the importance of the English language is well-known because..." and "...if there are any conditions..
DeleteDear Ms. Laura Reyes
ReplyDeleteMy name is Hazel Campos Luna, I´am 29 years old and study accounting in the UCR University. I have very interesting for the Creative English Scholarship offered by your Institute to travel to England and the United States to spend time studying and practicing English.
I think it would be a great opportunity to improve my professional development mainly because English today is very important to choose a good job. My goals are to have a great job and travel to various countries to develop myself, study and experience different cultures. Also I belive that meet all requirements.
Currently I have many questions about the program, the cost, lodging, meals, among other conditions, for this reason I would appreciate if I can meet next week, I could be Monday or Tuesday at 3 pm. I would appreciate if I can attend either of these two days.
Again, I appreciate your attention and help
Sincerely
Great! :) a few corrections: "I am" or "I´m" (not "I ´am") "I am very interested in the Creative..." and "Also I believe that I meet..." and "I would apreciate it if.."
DeleteDear Mrs. Reyes,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Julio Eduardo Mora, I am 14 years old and I am an estudent at Calasanz high school. I am in neith grade, and I notice that it would be an excellent decision to enter english classes so I can have a better english. I have received english classes since i was pretty young, but it isn't enough to have the quality of english that I want to.
So I decided to enter english classes with you, becuase I have hear a lot of positive comments about Universal de Idiomas. Before starting to study english with you I estudied portugues, but I realized that it is better if I get a better english before starting to learn any other lenguage.
So I found your Creative Scollarship to travel to England and United Estates and it seemed like a perfect program for what I am looking for. A way to perfect my english with native english speakers.
The reason why I am studying is beacause knowing how to speak a lenguage perfectly is like having a college career already earned, and as my parents said (and lots of more people) knowing leanguages open you doors around the world. These days profesionals know up to three lenguages, and english is one of the essential lenguages so i better have a perfect one.
I will want to know some more details about the program like the loding, the cost, and other details tha will be useful to know, so please tell me more about it.
By last but not least I will be really aprecciated if I was able to travel to Los Angeles were I notice that it is a state with a lots of cultural enrichment, as well as Colorado and London.
Thanks for your attention,
I will be waiting your answer.